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Chapter 3 - THE HOSPITAL WARD AND THE DETECTIVE

The sterile, blindingly white lights of City General Hospital felt like a nightmare I couldn't wake up from.

When I finally regained consciousness hours later, the smell of antiseptic and ozone hung heavy in the air. Machines beeped with a steady, rhythmic torture beside my bed. My body felt broken: two ribs were fractured from where I hit the pool edge, my abdomen throbbed with a dull, nauseating ache from internal bruising, and a deep concussion pounded behind my eyes like a relentless drum.

The door clicked open, and a tired-looking doctor stepped in, followed closely by a tall, broad-shouldered man in a rumpled gray suit holding a leather notepad.

"Ms. Vance?" the man asked, his voice low and professional. "I’m Detective Ruiz with the municipal police department."

I turned my swollen, tear-stained face toward him, my lips dry and cracked. "Detective..."

Detective Ruiz pulled up a metal chair and sat down, resting his elbows on his knees. He looked at me with sharp, assessing eyes that missed nothing. "Your family gave a statement down in the waiting room. They claimed you were feeling dizzy, tripped near the edge of the patio, and accidentally slipped into the pool while trying to grab Lauren’s arm."

A bitter, cynical laugh caught in my throat, turning into a painful cough. I gripped the scratchy hospital sheet with white knuckles.

"They lied," I whispered fiercely, my voice trembling with suppressed rage. "They lied. My mother didn't watch me slip. She punched me. She deliberately punched me in the stomach with full force because I refused to hand over my baby’s eighteen-thousand-dollar savings fund to my sister. And when I fell in, bleeding and unconscious, my father and sister watched me sink. They left me there to drown."

Detective Ruiz didn't flinch. He slowly flipped open his notepad and clicked his pen. "That is a very serious allegation, Ms. Vance. Do you have any witnesses?"

"Marissa," I said immediately, hope flaring in my chest. "Marissa pulled me out of the pool. She heard Lauren laughing. She saw everything."

The detective’s expression softened slightly, though professional caution remained in his eyes. "We’ve already spoken to Marissa. She confirmed you were bleeding in the water and that your family showed a complete lack of urgency or concern. But more importantly, Ms. Vance... your son is alive."

The breath rushed out of my lungs in a ragged gasp. Tears spilled over my eyelashes. "Noah? Is my baby okay?"

"He was delivered via emergency C-section just in time," Detective Ruiz said gently. "He’s in the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit right now. He’s tiny, he’s fighting hard, and he’s stable. But your family... they’re downstairs right now trying to figure out how to spin this story to the media and social circles so they look like grieving, supportive relatives."

I stared at the white ceiling, a cold, calculated fire replacing the grief in my chest. For three years, I had protected them. For three years, I had covered their financial messes, shielded them from consequences, and swallowed my pride.

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"Then they chose the wrong daughter to lie about," I whispered, my voice hardening into steel. "Detective... let's talk about an audit."

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