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Chapter 6 - The Unraveling

In the Great Marble Hall above, Duke Aldous Langrave sat upon his oak throne, surrounded by fifty of his highest-ranking officers, war ministers, and allied lords.

The hall was in ruins from the events of the previous night, but the Duke had refused to leave his seat. He had converted the shattered chamber into a war room. Maps of the Western Crownlands were spread across the central tables, weighted down by iron daggers and heavy gold coins.

"He is inside the city!" Duke Aldous roared, slamming his fist onto a map of the Lower Quarter. "Three thousand armed men cannot fail to find a single, ragged peasant boy! Burn the Lower Quarter if you must! Search every attic, every cellar, every sewer line!"

"My Lord Duke," Captain Rowan Vale said quietly, stepping forward from the map table. His armor was dented, and his face was grey with exhaustion. "The people of the Lower Quarter are rising. They heard the boy pulled the sword. Rumors are spreading through the weaver districts that the Forge-Master has returned. If we start burning homes, we won't be hunting a boy—we will be fighting a full-scale revolution."

"Let them revolt!" Duke Aldous spat, his eyes wild with fury. "Without that sword, they are nothing but sheep with rusty knives! I will crush them, rebuild the quarter, and—"

The Duke's words were cut short by a sound that shook the very bedrock of the mountain.

The center of the Great Marble Hall—directly where the mountain obsidian altar had once stood—exploded upward in a geyser of white light, shattered stone, and flying oak splinters.

The heavy war map table was thrown thirty feet into the air, splitting in half as it slammed into the carved stone balcony. War ministers shrieked, diving behind marble pillars as a cloud of white dust and blinding light filled the room.

When the dust slowly settled, a figure was standing in the center of the smoking crater.

It was Caelan Mercer.

His patched gray cloak was torn, hanging around his shoulders like the wings of a dark bird. His split-toe boots were gone, replaced by greaves of liquid, shimmering black metal that formed around his feet as he moved. The dark, cold veins on his arms were completely gone, replaced by glowing circuits of gold light that ran from his left hand—where the Master's Ring burned like a small star—straight into the hilt of Vael’gorath.

The blade was no longer silver-black. It was a terrifying, brilliant white, its edge so sharp that the air around it hissed and hummed with continuous thermal energy.

Beside Caelan, emerging from the smoking hole in the floor, was Theodore Langrave.

The noble heir was on his hands and knees, covered in white plaster dust, crying hysterically, his silver plate armor scorched and dented. He crawled away from Caelan, reaching out toward his father's throne with trembling, bloody fingers.

"Father..." Theodore wheezed, his voice broken. "He... he took the ring... he broke the vault..."

Duke Aldous stood up from his throne. His face turned from red to an icy, deathly white. He looked at his broken, weeping son, then raised his eyes to meet Caelan's glowering stare.

"You," the Duke whispered.

"Me," Caelan replied. His voice carried through the ruined hall with the force of a thunderclap, vibrating the iron breastplates of every soldier present.

Captain Vale drew his sword, but he didn't advance. He stepped back, placing himself between the Duke and the crater, his eyes wide with absolute awe. He had fought in twenty battles, but he had never seen a human being radiate such raw, unadulterated power.

"Guards!" Duke Aldous screamed, his composure finally shattering into sheer, unhinged desperation. "Kill him! I will give ten thousand gold crowns—no, fifty thousand gold crowns! I will make whoever slays him a Count of the Realm! Kill him!"

The fifty guards in the hall looked at each other. They looked at the fifty thousand gold crown promise. Then they looked at the boy standing in the white-fire crater, holding a sword that was currently melting the marble floor beneath its tip into liquid glass.

Not a single soldier moved.

"Cowards!" Duke Aldous roared. He reached down, tearing an iron broadsword from the scabbard of the captain standing beside him. The old Duke was a powerful man, trained in war from his youth, built like an ox despite his age. He leaped down from the dais, lifting the broadsword with both hands, bringing it down toward Caelan's head with all the weight of his rage.

Caelan didn't even lift Vael’gorath to block.

He simply raised his left hand—the hand bearing the Master's Ring—and caught the six-pound iron broadsword blade with his bare fingers.

Snap.

The iron blade shattered into a dozen glowing red fragments that rained down onto the stone floor.

Duke Aldous stumbled forward, staring in numb horror at the jagged, broken hilt remaining in his hands.

Caelan stepped forward, his eyes burning with white fire, and placed his palm against Duke Aldous's iron breastplate.

"This city was built on iron and sweat," Caelan said softly, his voice cutting through the Duke's frantic gasps. "Not gold and lies. Your house's time is over."

Caelan released a single pulse of thermal force through the Master's Ring.

The Duke's heavy steel breastplate exploded outward in a shower of harmless sparks, blowing the old man off his feet and sending him flying twenty feet back, slamming into the base of his own oak throne.

The Duke did not get up. He lay there, gasping for breath, his chest bruised, his power, his pride, and his family dynasty shattered in a single second.

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Caelan turned his gaze across the remaining nobles, ministers, and guards.

Every single one of them dropped their weapons. The clatter of swords, spears, and iron shields hitting the marble floor echoed through the silent, ruined hall like a confession of total surrender.

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