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Chapter 6 - HOSPITAL BREAKDOWN

"Ella!" Aunt Diane shrieked.

The boutique erupted into chaos. Mrs. Gable dropped her measuring tape, and I tore at the back zip of my green dress, scrambling off the pedestal despite the tight fabric.

Ella lay completely limp on the polished floor, her breathing shallow, her skin ice-cold.

"Call 911!" I screamed at the receptionist, who was already fumbling with the landline desk phone.

Mom rushed over, kneeling beside Diane, who was shaking Ella’s shoulders frantically. "Ella! Wake up! Ella, stop acting like this!" Diane cried, her voice cracking with a mixture of panic and fury. "Rachel, help me get her up!"

"Don't shake her!" I yelled, dropping down beside my cousin. I grabbed Ella’s wrist—her pulse was weak, fluttering like the wing of a trapped bird. "She hasn't eaten in three days, Aunt Diane! Stop shouting at her!"

"What are you talking about?!" Diane snapped, her eyes wide with shock. "She ate lunch!"

"She ate three celery sticks and a cup of black coffee!" I yelled back, tears streaming down my face. "And you gave her diet pills!"

Aunt Diane froze. Her face turned ghost-white as she stared at me, then looked at my mother.

Mom didn't say a word. She just looked at Diane with a sudden, devastating clarity. The competition, the pettiness, the years of comparison—it all collapsed in an instant under the cold light of a medical emergency.

Ten minutes later, the paramedics arrived. They lifted Ella onto a gurney, hooked her up to an IV, and wheeled her out into the blinding snowstorm toward Riverside Methodist Hospital.

The hospital waiting room was sanitized, cold, and quiet except for the rhythmic humming of the vending machines.

My dad arrived thirty minutes later, still in his work suit, followed by Grandma Helen. Dad took one look at me—still wearing my unzipped green formal dress with a heavy winter coat draped over my shoulders—and pulled me into a tight hug.

"Are you okay, baby?" he whispered.

"I'm fine, Dad," I sobbed into his shoulder. "It's Ella. She's really sick."

In the corner of the waiting room, Aunt Diane sat rigid on a plastic chair, her head in her hands. Mom stood by the window, staring out at the snow falling over the parking lot.

The doctor came out through the double doors at 7:00 PM.

"Family of Ella Vance?"

Diane bolted up. "I'm her mother. How is she? Can she go home?"

The doctor, a stern woman with tired eyes, looked down at her chart. "Ella is stabilized, but her blood sugar was dangerously low, and her heart rhythm showed signs of severe electrolyte imbalance brought on by extreme malnutrition and stimulant misuse."

Diane gasped. "Stimulants? No, she... she just takes vitamins—"

"Mrs. Vance," the doctor interrupted coldly. "We ran a blood tox screen. We found high levels of prescription amphetamines in her system—drugs not prescribed to her. Her body was close to cardiac distress. We are admitting her to the adolescent eating disorder and recovery unit immediately."

Diane took a step back, her hands trembling. "No... no, she has a dance recital next week. She can't stay here..."

"She must stay here," the doctor said firmly. "And because of the unprescribed medications found in a minor's system, hospital policy requires us to file a report with Child Protective Services."

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Diane sank back into her chair, burying her face in her hands, sobbing uncontrollably.

Mom took a slow step toward her sister. For the first time in my life, I didn't see jealousy or competition in my mother's eyes. I saw horror.

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