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Chapter 17 - The Trap in the Snow

My heart hammered against my ribs like a caged bird. I didn't panic; years of surviving Doña Carmela’s psychological warfare had forged my reflexes into iron. I crept backward across the dark bedroom, my bare feet making zero sound on the rugs, and gently shook Anton awake.

His eyes snapped open instantly—a testament to the hyper-vigilance ingrained in him since childhood. He didn't speak; he simply caught my eye, sat up, and reached for the heavy iron fireplace poker resting beside the hearth.

I moved to the side of the door, gripping a heavy marble decorative vase with both hands, positioning myself just out of the line of sight of the entryway.

Outside, the footsteps stopped directly in front of our door.

We waited, holding our breath, the silence in the room so absolute I could hear the blood rushing in my ears.

*Click.*

The doorknob turned. Slowly, agonizingly, the heavy oak door began to swing inward. A thin slice of hallway light cut across the dark bedroom floor.

A figure slipped into the room.

They moved with practiced stealth, wrapped in a heavy black tactical coat, their face obscured by a dark woolen balaclava. The intruder didn't head toward the bed; instead, they moved straight toward the wooden nightstand where our water pitchers and glasses sat—the exact spot where I had poured a drink just minutes earlier.

In the dim light, I saw the intruder's gloved hand pull a small, amber glass vial from their pocket. They uncorked it with a tiny *pop* and leaned over the water pitcher, tilting the vial forward.

*Not this time,* I thought.

"Drop it!" I shouted, bursting out from the shadows and hurling the heavy marble vase directly toward the nightstand to smash the vial before it could contaminate our water.

The vase shattered against the hardwood floor with an explosive crash, sending porcelain shards flying everywhere. The intruder spun around in shock, dropping the vial, which rolled across the floor and pooled its dark contents into the splattered water.

Anton lunged forward like a striking predator, tackling the intruder around the waist. They hit the floor with a heavy thud, sliding across the rugs as a fierce, silent struggle broke out in the dark bedroom.

The intruder was surprisingly strong, thrashing violently to break free from Anton’s grip. With a sudden, vicious wrench, the intruder managed to twist around, elbowing Anton hard in the ribs, and scrambled toward the open balcony doors leading out into the freezing alpine night.

"Don't let them get away!" I yelled, rushing over and grabbing a heavy woolen blanket from the bed.

Anton scrambled up, shaking off the blow, and chased the intruder out onto the snowy balcony. I sprinted right behind them, bursting out into the freezing mountain air, the sub-zero wind biting instantly through my silk pajamas.

The intruder had scrambled onto the wooden railing of the balcony, preparing to leap down to the lower snowbank, but Anton lunged forward, grabbing the heavy black coat just as they jumped.

The fabric tore violently. The balaclava was ripped completely off the intruder's head in the struggle, sending it tumbling down into the snowy abyss below.

The figure hit the snowbank below with a muffled crash, scrambled back to their feet with desperate speed, and bolted into the dark tree line bordering the lodge property.

Anton stood frozen on the balcony railing, panting heavily in the freezing mountain air, staring down into the darkness where the intruder had vanished.

I stepped up beside him, shivering violently from the cold, and gripped his arm. "Did you see their face? Who was it, Anton?"

Anton turned slowly to look at me, his face pale, his eyes wide with a mixture of shock and utter disbelief.

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"It wasn't Victoria," Anton breathed, his voice trembling in the freezing air. "Clara... it was Marcus."

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